Review Detail of Son_of_the_Sun_God in Zenith: Last Revenant

Had a great start, foundation and idea but the more chapters you read the more disappointed you become. The mc becomes incredibly annoying to read about. Every chapter ppl are complaining in the comments. It drifts away from the dc atmosphere. I’m just disappointed bc this fanfic could’ve been so amazing with the unique wishes and setting but I think I’ll just stop here . Anyway good luck author