Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Zenith: Last Revenant
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ehhh not the best story tbh. The first two chapters are a joke so ignore them and don't judge the rest of the fanfic on them. The main problem I have with this story is the mc's personality is a joke. It's like a child throwing a tantrum not getting his way. After all these years he never matures, its always the same child tantrum personality. We see no growth, no changes. The author says the mc gets depressed etc but that's the thing he says it but doesn't show it. All that is shown is again the childish tantrum. No changes. Honestly for me, this just pure and plainly ruins the rest of the story. I just can't like the story when the mc is like that. Gl to the author but yeah
Zenith: Last Revenant
Shaele
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The original story was a lot better than this, the mc wasn't doing a lot of mistakes he acted how somebody who died so many times and has so much experience should. i dropped this after continue reading on the chapter that i was on in the original Story, why? because they completly changed the personality of the mc in the first chapter they made. He became a beta mc and acted like a 15 year old. It came to my attention that im still mad at this author for destroying one of my Favorite Story's (even tho it's been like one year)
