While in this site - Webnovel - they are already bunch of reincarnation, system, cultivation, game-based, harem, isekai-ed stories... finding mystery + detective-like plot itself is already rare. And here we are found one of the rare story in the site. The plot is intriguing and the first murder case already get me hooked. The detectives having their own characters that either make the investigation harder and easier. Such an odd combination indeed, but they did the job done. So far, the story is good, except some grammar issues which I'm not gonna judge since in my own novel grammar issues also in it. But a quite notable issue I have would likely the dialogue which sometimes lack of who's talking and to whom one talking. It took me quite a while to understand it. But, there's still a but... these all are based on the very early chapters and I believe later in the story, the author already improve his/her "style" of dialogue which is I want to continue to read. Overall, the plot, mystery and cases are extraordinary good... despite the early chapters that are quite confusing for some. Just give it a try until you reach a certain number of chapters, then you good to continue. For the author, simply keep writing and have fun! :D
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Aww. .. thank so much for being such a patient reader .. This is what we authors want.To be appreciated alongside of remarks and showing us what is wrong or right,without judging our mistakes!
Writing itself a process. Not only the MC or the characters inside the story that undergo the development, but the author as well. "So write, because we are writers."
JumanKalita:Aww. .. thank so much for being such a patient reader .. This is what we authors want.To be appreciated alongside of remarks and showing us what is wrong or right,without judging our mistakes!
