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Well, I have read some chapters so far...and the premise was interesting while the story line after that was engrossing even though FL novels are not my cup of tea. The characters are detailed enough but maybe it would be good to make the MC's character more fleshed out. So far, she seems a bit naive? Maybe the character is supposed to be like that and we will see how she develops. The thrills and the mystery in this novel were legit. I am sure some chapters will keep you on your toes. And apart from some grammar hiccups, the writing quality is just fine. I hope the author keeps up his/her work and continue delivering amazing chapters :)

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Unknowingly Lost

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Thank you for giving an honest and constructive criticism. Also thank you for giving it a try to read :) Oh yes, I intended the MC to be naive as she is an introverted person and lacks in social skills but I plan to make her character develop as the story goes but thank you for pointing it out :D