The fantasy setting was niche and the Idea was very solid. Nice way of narrating things and a good grasp of grammar. Although I can see some things to edit here and there but it was still not worth mentioning. This will become great as the author was talented, saying that his novel was in good hands. Good job! and Good luck!
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