Review Detail of BAJJ in The Son of Time and the Olympians

Writing Quality: Smoother than a baby bum :) It was easy to read. I love the narration: straight to the point, no merry-go-round. The flow? It's almost perfect. (saying that just because I'm bitter and I know there's nothing perfect, alright? If anyone wants to argue with me, I kill you.) Also, it's NOT BORING, which I didn't expect before reading it. IM BEING HONEST. Stability of Updates: I don't know about the update frequency, but let me tell y'all, even if I get one chapter a week, the quality of the chapter itself is worth waiting for. Che! Story Development: Juicy. lol. I mean, intriguing. Jokes aside, the story development was neither slow nor fast. Each chapter, there's development. The mystery slowly builds up, reeling the readers in, and keeps them hooked. Character Design: I can't say much about this for now, will edit after reading more chapters... which will probably take me forever before I can catch up to the latest chapter. World Background: Read the title and synopsis again -.- you'll know. My comment in this part is, the author did his research about Greek Mythology and then added some interesting spices in it. Overall, I'll probably read this story SLOWLY. The narration piqued my interest, the plot and humor hooked me in. I applaud the author for his effort and congratulates him for doing a good job in every chapter. *claps* Keep up the awesome work :) The only problem that I can probably say was that it lacks is a strong cliffhanger. (It might just be me, so don't mind me about that last part. just treat it as a comment from someone who's high in painkillers.)