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2020-10-26 00:21

Writing Quality: Smoother than a baby bum :) It was easy to read. I love the narration: straight to the point, no merry-go-round. The flow? It's almost perfect. (saying that just because I'm bitter and I know there's nothing perfect, alright? If anyone wants to argue with me, I kill you.) Also, it's NOT BORING, which I didn't expect before reading it. IM BEING HONEST. Stability of Updates: I don't know about the update frequency, but let me tell y'all, even if I get one chapter a week, the quality of the chapter itself is worth waiting for. Che! Story Development: Juicy. lol. I mean, intriguing. Jokes aside, the story development was neither slow nor fast. Each chapter, there's development. The mystery slowly builds up, reeling the readers in, and keeps them hooked. Character Design: I can't say much about this for now, will edit after reading more chapters... which will probably take me forever before I can catch up to the latest chapter. World Background: Read the title and synopsis again -.- you'll know. My comment in this part is, the author did his research about Greek Mythology and then added some interesting spices in it. Overall, I'll probably read this story SLOWLY. The narration piqued my interest, the plot and humor hooked me in. I applaud the author for his effort and congratulates him for doing a good job in every chapter. *claps* Keep up the awesome work :) The only problem that I can probably say was that it lacks is a strong cliffhanger. (It might just be me, so don't mind me about that last part. just treat it as a comment from someone who's high in painkillers.)

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Thank you, BAJJ! I'll work on the things you've pointed out because they're really helpful :) Appreciate the review :)

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mssuigeneris
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Just an overview to set your expectations. MC - orphaned boy, kinda stupid but actually clever. Yeah, idk if you get that. He's not OP too, so bye if you expect him to be. He just wants to get back in the present but he's stuck in Ancient Greece. Classic slow rise to power, this is. Romance? - did I put a romance tag? Yes, I guess I did. Is there romance in the story? Almost 60 chapters in and there's no sign of that. I only put the tag there for the far, far future. I'm BAD at writing romance so that sht will happen in the very, very far future of this novel if I'll even allow it. Also no harem, Greek stories you prolly know are already full of that. Adventure - Yes. High-octane even with a touch of stupid from time to time. Era hops. Many characters, both Greek ones and OCs. Yes, OCs. This is not a fanfiction, luh. Plot - time-travel here and there, some twists and turns, but most twists will happen in Vol. 2 (Age of Heroes) as the events of Vol. 1 will only pave the way for the grander scheme of things. Might be quite a drag, but essential. Lore - yeah, I inserted funfacts every now and then. Myths aren't accurate and most have multiple versions. Not everyone appreciates lore and figurative writing, so bye again. Just correct me if I'm wrong. Comedy - this is a GAG novel mostly, don't expect me to be serious all the time. Expect dumbassery of some gods, the Greek Pantheon is full of bullcrap. They aren't perfect, luh. If u get the puns and references, congrats. Research - hell, I spent time doing research, but I don't guarantee the accuracy of everything. Lemme tell u that if you're new to greek mythology, reading this might interest you to that sht. So go to the auxiliary chapter. There's my caveat for that. Isekai? - Strictly speaking, no. Isekai means 'another world'. MC wasn't transported to another world. He went back in time - to when the world was still young. You can call it, an 'isekai-in-disguise' (much like Dr. Stone, same world, just another timeline.)

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