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nyypeLv44yr
2020-10-19 16:30

Hi Josev. I like story as I like to read action novels rather than crawling stories for example romantics. I came along couple of mixing different time tenses. You may update or you may not because they re not blinding anyway. I liked it, keep it alive as we wonder how it will be developed

Ungranted

Josev_Quadra
4.8
189 Chs

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Josev_Quadra
Josev_QuadraAuthor

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it! Will edit more

4yr
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Josev_Quadra
Josev_QuadraAuthor

Hello there, folks! I am very happy to see that Ungranted finally gain some recognition! As you can see, the novel is written in POV (point of view) manner. I hope that this will make the readers feel more immersive in the world and able to follow the characters development more intimately! I hope you enjoy my work! There's also another book of mine called, The Voice in the Dark if you like contemporary romance. Please, do drop by if you want to read more of my works^^

4yr

MikruZero
MikruZeroLv4

To be honest, this book has potential. A lot of grammatical, punctuations, and tenses mistakes. But don't worry, these mistakes are common for beginners. Also, you need to research more about the thing you are gonna put in the book. This way, you can better describe it and the scenes in the story. Improve your vocab and knowledge. Well, that's all. Do your best!

4yr
Kathie_Kav
Kathie_KavLv2

The character development is really great and I really like the story and the plot. The story is really awesome and specially the character development is admirable. I hope the author good luck👍

4yr
ssfx3yuchens
ssfx3yuchensLv10

I like the story. it's interesting to read about the wishmaker and the various technologies mentioned in the book, a glimpse into the future. author, keep it up 😀 added to my library for further reading!!

4yr
Bayy_Yuu
Bayy_YuuLv1

the storyline given is very organized and easy to understand for many people. and I really like the way the writer forms the characters in the story, I hope this story can be read by many people out there. thank you, God bless you

3yr
KWEEN_BL
KWEEN_BLLv1

I am your true friend and thus I WILL COMMENT HERE AND SAY, "YOU WRITE GOOD STUFF AND PRETTY SUSPENSEFUL AS WELL!". I love where you ken see people true colors and then they go "Uwo you found me out" :3 Don't lose hope my friend, you write good shet!

3yr
Kuroshine
KuroshineLv1

Executed nicely! It's a bit dark and psychological, with romance as accessory! I like seeing strong female lead in a story~ I hope you update more of this author-nim!

3yr
Amagirizen
AmagirizenLv1

Nyaan, thankies for the treat! I really love this kind of survival story :3 The dystopian is thick in this one, if you like romance and action, plus the psychology aspects revolving the characters...then this novel is good for you! It's interesting to see that you're exploring each of these characters so detailed, so that none of them feels like a side characters. They're driven by something, and that's the reason why they're humans. It's a similar thing I sense from this anime I watched, but I'm not going to spoil the anime here lol. Anyway, do your best author!

3yr
Zuxian
ZuxianLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
ohhdarling
ohhdarlingLv14

Reveal spoiler

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