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Stoicist
StoicistAuthor1yrStoicist

Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"

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Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

Stoicist

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KottuRoti
KottuRotiLv12KottuRoti

Don’t change keep it no harem 😁

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Stoicist
StoicistAuthorStoicist

Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)

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king2005
king2005Lv4king2005

Romance??

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Stoicist
StoicistAuthorStoicist

Sure thing!

king2005:Romance??
RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

hope u wont change your mind

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Han_SuYeong
Han_SuYeongLv4Han_SuYeong

author can you put khalid ibn al-walid the most undefeated general in Islam please

4rthr77
4rthr77Lv24rthr77

esse huehue entregou kkkkk, aliás concordo que sem harem seria melhor.

Stoicist
StoicistAuthorStoicist

Sempre!

4rthr77:esse huehue entregou kkkkk, aliás concordo que sem harem seria melhor.
Stoicist
StoicistAuthorStoicist

I will do some research on him and see if I can add him somewhere around, maybe I can utilize some of his tactics. Thank you for the support!

Han_SuYeong:author can you put khalid ibn al-walid the most undefeated general in Islam please
RyuSenju
RyuSenjuLv11RyuSenju

I'm only here for the kingdom building and romance

Stoicist:Sure thing!
Han_SuYeong
Han_SuYeongLv4Han_SuYeong

mc used khalid ibn al-walid tactics to defeat desert army right can you put it please

Stoicist:I will do some research on him and see if I can add him somewhere around, maybe I can utilize some of his tactics. Thank you for the support!
Han_SuYeong
Han_SuYeongLv4Han_SuYeong

rules of war

Tadeas_Manzel
Tadeas_ManzelLv14Tadeas_Manzel

if this is true, most ppl and ven believers of the same religions dont do by that so... i can say, in war is win what matter, winner decide and looser can just accept.....

Han_SuYeong:rules of war
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KangGalon
KangGalonLv3KangGalon

HHHHHAAAAAARRRRRREEEEEEEMMMM!!!!

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader

read for now i am out if it changes to harem

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Fallen_Angel777
Fallen_Angel777Lv4Fallen_Angel777

harem nah one or two love interest is fine by me , keep up the good work🍻

Sad_Armadillo
Sad_ArmadilloLv15Sad_Armadillo

Please no harem.

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Lizardzzz
LizardzzzLv10Lizardzzz

no harem please. I has dropped a lot of novel bc the author decided to change to harem😔

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
ageless_heart
ageless_heartLv13ageless_heart

Bro don’t write a harem if your a beginner writer romance isn’t easy to write also harder when add multiple people

Stoicist:Sorry, but no harem in sight. (I might change this later on, but, for now, it's not in my plans.)
Stoicist
StoicistAuthorStoicist

Not on my radar for now! Thank you for the support!!

Lizardzzz:no harem please. I has dropped a lot of novel bc the author decided to change to harem😔