Tadeas_Manzel
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[From my data, the highest OVR on the senior team is 82 whiles the lowest is 68] Max said.- Tadeas_Manzel1dCommented
thx for the chapter i was thinking, if he will show up for senior team, shouldnt he max out some stat to be exceptional in team in something, like pasing or dribling, to do crucial passes, or be good at 1 on 1 as for now he will be under avarage if put agains adults so it would be good to be better in something if he just gradualy up his stat overall it take a longer time to be as good as them, but if he will be best in sone area, he will get oportunity more. just though all is in hand of author i just thinking aloud. (be genius in passes in senior team sounds good :D before he will be ace of team in overall stats.) looking forward to what you bring to us author.
Ch 24 Sevilla u19 [Pt 2] - Tadeas_Manzel1dReplied to wandering_chaos777Ch 22 Changes and Growth
- Tadeas_Manzel2dCommented
dear author, i rlly like your story but i cant help it, and mention it again, you put izan stats in this chapter 22 two times and behind his age you put weeks to his 15 yo. again as in previous chapters the weeks there are different, its rlly confusing, always even in previous chapter there were strange differences.... my advice to you dear author, just stop it, its confusing for you its better if you put just his year age there and left out the weeks totaly, it will stop to be confusing. btw to guy up there olivia is fine, its youthfull love so cute and sweet, nothing to worry about there...
Ch 22 Changes and Growth - Tadeas_Manzel2dReplied to wandering_chaos777Ch 21 Gradually
- Tadeas_Manzel6dCommentedCh 21 Gradually
- Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
its practicaly grown up heigh already ...
AGE:[14( 4 monthsTO 15)] - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
.... no.....
When he stood,he saw that his eye level had risen a bit." I think I've gotten taller" Izan said with a grin. Izan left the washroom not wanting to waste anymore time. He decided to go and wash off the gooey liquid from his body. - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
pleas no dont make him some monster who is grown up more than his age should be, and its more chalanging to be smaller then opponents and make them run for their money than some 'not normal growth' thingy
"Ding"[the growth potion stimulates host's latent growth and helps host's muscles and body evolve. This helps the host avoid any career ending injuries and also helps the host to use his body easily] - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
its first game and he got rlly a lot of points isnt it to fast?? he will be alien player already at his 16 in this way i know make him rlly strong but i hope these getting is for achievements of first goal and assist etc. only as it will be rlly too fast... i like him got stronger but i hope author has plans and dont rush things to have room for later grow up. beside thats thx for chapters.
The match was played on a Friday so Izan slept in and woke up at 9. He immediately went down and drank some milk before doing a set of yoga poses. Feeling sweaty after he finished the yoga routine he went out not wanting the sweat to dry off to complete his daily task. - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
her son not his :D but its okey we can understand as english is not primary language of yours and we got the message i just posting if you decide correct it
"Wow, you can see that the boy in the no. 21 jersey is very good" someone in the crowd said. "Yeah you can see that the match has turned in favour of the valencia youth after he came on" another added. "Who is he by the way" another spectator commented. Komi who was heard all this wanted to scream to all of them that the boy was his son but she kept control of herself. Hori who most at times seemed uninterested in whatever Izan was doing seemed to be really having fun. She however didn't keep quiet. "Hey thats my brother" she said to one of the girls around her. "Really,he looks handsome" a girl commented. "Of course he is. He's my brother after all " hori said once again before the screams of the crowd brought her attention to the game again. This was because Izan had ball. - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
truthfully, thats should be said for both sides.....
'The valencia team has a few new faces as some of the young guns that were playing very good football have been called up to the under-19s. This really weakens the valencia side but I still think they are the favourites for this match as Alboraya is just one place above the last team on.' - Tadeas_Manzel8dReplied to Tadeas_Manzel
i already gave my stones tright now but i will give you regularly some if you will cobtinue with the story :)
AGE:14( 4 MONTHS TO 15) - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommented
hey man i am rlly confused in all stats showing its different, 6,2, now 4... and coach even before match between regular and reserve call him as ifnwe have gem but from his skeptical point of view of him before he could at max say lets see what surprised we will see or get. otherwise nice story, definitely add to library and will see how its goes. ussualy give overall review around ch.50 or 100 so i hope you will not drop it as its look promissing and .till now otherwise two points up there i like to read your work, so keep going and i wish you gl and for us i pray you will continue. thank you for your work btw :)
AGE:14( 4 MONTHS TO 15) - Tadeas_Manzel8dCommentedCh 5 It gets better
- Tadeas_Manzel9dCommented
most of football novels are striker or winger if he end up mostly in midfield it would be awasome
"[Looking at some of your attributes like speed and crossing,you could transition to be a winger whiles attributes like like your good vision and decent ball control you could also opt for a more stable central midfielder. In my opinion let's not settle for one position since teams or coaches these days like versatility so I would advice you go for a wing forward/attacking midfielder type of position]" said the system. - Tadeas_Manzel9dCommented
wow thimbs up for bot being female, apreciated change for that for once.
"Well okay then I'll call you max " said izan and just then the system took on a masculine form of voice which seemed familiar to izan. - Tadeas_Manzel9dCommented
up there was 6 moths written... how sudenly its 2?
AGE:14(2 MONTHS TO 15) - Tadeas_Manzel9dCommented
lets see :)
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