Amazing book! The plot is very grippy and doesn't let you leave it incomplete. I kinda enjoyed it a lot and the characters are designed so that they're very relatable. The dialogue delivery is really good and you can almost 'feel' the person delivering the dialogue in front of you. Description is like a double-edged sword. Everyone yields it. You use it too much, you damage your story and same for providing too little of it. I guess you have kept the descriptions simple and elegant and I didn't find a moment where I had to read-through the paragraph again to find out what you were actually describing. Overall, solid job!
caia clearwood
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