Should I try to make something out of this?idk but yall gonna have to deal with my bullshit until I figure out a schedule. See ya later I bois

great fanfic mc with nagatos power is incredible making him seek peace is like we have a real nagato in mha which isnt bad its a great idea and that the omni potent god is going to send 3 naruto characters there is a fantastic idea would be funny to see his reaction later. it is great how that you dont follow the plot so you can use your own ideas. all in all it is a fantastic fanfix👍👌

I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.

Dont lose faith author, if you have an objective you want your main character to accomplish then the step-by-step process to accomplish that objective can be written down and used for inspiration, the readers need to know what motivates the main character and you can add a little fun by writing fillers 🤔 If you dont have a lot of imagination then why write in the first place?

trash he has a god complex when he met god before he reincarnated

I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..) -Deathho

I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day

I love how the author made the story have some twists in it my favorite is how the author made some Naruto characters enter the MHA world and I hope he makes like Nagito enter and the MC like takes his eyes and makes Nagito on of the Paths along with the original akatsuki members

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