Review Detail of Brother59 in The Demon Monarch System

It’s been a minute since I came back to this novel. I’m parked at 529 because I told Syph no more until he started releasing chapters like normal again. Plotholes, and bad storytelling nearly ruined the novel early for me. What kept me was the growth in quality over time despite the stumbles here and there. I gladly poured hundreds of dollars into this despite the fact I was broke to see it pan out, and support Syph. It’s a good story overall if you can stomach the holes, but I can’t recommend it all. Unfinished as it is with the errors, and the lack of ending will only leave you with unfortunate regret as the novel progresses into something you enjoy only to be ruined with no updates.