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2022-08-22 12:06

Wow... So cool! I love how your novel has some elements of bleach anime inside because I'm a big fan of that anime! Although there are some comma placement errors and so on, your story is very interesting! And, to be honest, I'm even starting to feel a little insecure now... Haha! XD

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Yeah, it's my first time writing this. I'm glad you liked it, but please respect on the way I write.

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Of course!

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