I dont know why this is famous, there's so many unnecessary intro. Learning magic while forgetting things? Not allowed to know and stuff? Please, those are nothing but fillers for the story. You could've just went on the story for the new world. This is like eating the food but playing with it first but in an irritating way.
kizitomayanja
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LIKEHow much have you read i am curious? And aslo character development do you know what that is? Constructive criticism I get but this is or seems to be just insulting. And also if you are going to write a bad review at least get your review to make sense. And finally but not least, understand something. Fillers at the start? Generally the intro is used to set a scene or an environment or the character or plot. They are hard to do amazingly yet i think this intro is good. The mc does not have to be perfect or a all out gods chosen at everything. If u want that find a novel that will give u that and make sure to read everything fully.
I can say itās obvious you donāt write books yourself, or at least not good ones. The stuff you call āfillersā yeah, every famous story has them. Filler arcs give stories background and character, itās world building and development and it is required to make a good story. Even the most famous of books have āfillerā stuff as you call it. That is not a downside of a book. Would you rather read a book that has nothing but the main events and not any info on how they got there or etc? āfillerā stuff is required, it is what makes a book good because it builds the world. Either way, the author did a good job. Donāt EVER mind it when someone complains about āfillerā stuff.
If you look on his account, he only leaves bad reviews. He is just a negative person, pay no mind to him. Also, the stuff he calls āfillerā chapters are actually required to make a good book because it is part of the world building and character development process, without quote on quote āfillerā arcs, a story will never be good. The most famous books have āfillerā stuff. Itās important, the fact that he states it as a bad thing means he has never written a book (at least a good one) nor does he know anything about proper story making. You did a fine job, pay no mind to comments like this, it is just needless negativity.
kizitomayanja:š¤š¤š¤Ouch... How far did you go to make this review... Have you even got to the part where all that is explained or did you just hate the concept of amnesiaš„ŗš„ŗš„ŗ?
Kydul1137:If you look on his account, he only leaves bad reviews. He is just a negative person, pay no mind to him. Also, the stuff he calls āfillerā chapters are actually required to make a good book because it is part of the world building and character development process, without quote on quote āfillerā arcs, a story will never be good. The most famous books have āfillerā stuff. Itās important, the fact that he states it as a bad thing means he has never written a book (at least a good one) nor does he know anything about proper story making. You did a fine job, pay no mind to comments like this, it is just needless negativity.
Np, I write too and I know how hard it is to make a good story and keep it going and entertaining. Needless negative feedback that is not even accurate and completely opinionated is not what any author deserves.
kizitomayanja:Wow... Thanksš„°ā¤ļø