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A well done story better than many stories here on webnovel deserving more popularity. There are times that story seems like a high school drama, but I didn't mind it. Given their age, amnesia, and discovery of a new world puts a lot of pressure on the characters. You can feel the emotion and struggles of the characters as they fight to save a planet. All this happens in less than 1 month. The were always constant questions and mysteries the characters face that they slowly get unraveled over time. There are some grammatical errors but very little and do little to take away from the story. I felt fights were a weaker apart of the story along with the villains. After 800 years, they felt lax and not strong overall probably from arrogance? When facing multiple dark mages it felt like a 1v1 dueling style. The alpha felt like the weakest ones maybe due to not being able to control her powers? Overall, good story that deserves it's rating.

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Thanks for the feedback... wow, I'm so happy... This has made my day... I'll try to go through and brush up on the grammatical errors... Thanks again :)