So far this story is pretty fun to read!! The writing quality is pretty good, and I especially enjoyed the dialogue. Though the characters seem a tad basic at the moment, I'm hoping they'll develop and become more interesting as the story goes along (after all it's only the start). In the same vein, the world background was developed quite nicely, and it's pretty easy to understand. This work feels pretty fast paced, but that hasn't led to any issues with story development as far as I've noticed. In summary, great work so far and I'll probs be adding this work to my library ^ u ^
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