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Bulbasaur
BulbasaurLv134yr
2020-12-26 14:02

This story has piqued my interest, but I do not know why it has been given its current rating. The author is not native to English, so I would not recommend reading this novel if you are looking for easy reading. I read what I could but have yet to find anything substantial in the story, as it is buried in grammatical errors. I will be checking on this book to see how the author improves, and I hope they continue their writing. For now, however, this novel reads like an MTL. (Machine Translation) TL;DR The story looks interesting, but the grammar needs some work.

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Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfAuthor

Thank you for sharing your review. This is an international platform, certainly, all of the authors are not native or English speakers. I'm writing to learn and this story was my beginning. All I do is exercising and learning more to improve my writing passion.

Bulbasaur
BulbasaurLv13

I am glad to hear that, and I hope you continue your story. I in no way meant to discourage you and am excited to see how your writing progresses. Keep up the good work!

Naz_Mzf:Thank you for sharing your review. This is an international platform, certainly, all of the authors are not native or English speakers. I'm writing to learn and this story was my beginning. All I do is exercising and learning more to improve my writing passion.
Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfAuthor

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Bulbasaur:I am glad to hear that, and I hope you continue your story. I in no way meant to discourage you and am excited to see how your writing progresses. Keep up the good work!
Marschmallow
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They are fake reviews.

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