Review Detail of TaintedMetal in The Fraternity

Really enjoy both the concept and the execution. The story puts focus on the fantastical aspects and I commend it, particularly since the fantasy is developed in a unique way. Characters are developed nicely and the sentences equally flow nicely as well. So far with 7 chapters I am starting to get a grasp of the story's setting (or world or maybe even universe) and I look forward for more chapters in the future.