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herramaetherLv13yr
2021-04-26 19:44

This is a good story, but the author needs to take note of improper tense usage and an awkward word choice. However, the author is able to paint such a vivid picture with his/her/their words that I felt very drawn into the story. Keep it up, author!

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Aislinn_Jasper
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thanks for pointing out my mistakes... :)

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