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Ep_E_XLv211mth
2023-12-28 14:35

I'm Currently in chapter 100.. and i have only one word to describe this story.. it's an utter disappointment and super boring.. too many useless information that it gets super annoying the more i go through the chapters..The mc characters are frustrating,so if you want a satisfying dragon ball story ,this story is not for you..

Dragon Ball Revised

LOLRIP
4.2
151 Chs

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MegaMacho
MegaMachoLv6

Very original DBZ fanfic, with a very good start. Some plot which to not spoil, in my opinion, was genius, and any DBZ fan should give it a try. Also, the author note in the auxiliary showed his passion for this fanfic, and DBZ in general. Not only that but he is active in the comments, which is nice to me, instead of a ghost author. My rating is 9000+

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Gabriel_Cabral
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author, mc is very weak and nerfed, it doesn't mean he is weak for a saiyan like mc, but he is a fucking legendary super saiyan, in broly's movie, he forced goku to use ssjblue in order to suffer some damage, and look that he lived on an island alone with his father without any training, and our MC with all his training and support of tuffle technology does not have the same growth as the movie broly when he had no support at all (in the movie), the MC should be a genius in the fight like his film counterpart, but honestly I can't see that

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LOLRIP
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Shameless Author 5-star review The fanfic had been up and running for a while now and I have not heard someone yell into the abyss about how trash it is so I must be doing something right. The novel is set in the Dragon Ball world and is absolutely NON CANON but will definitely contain all characters cannon or not and will explore a lot within the world. The pace of the story will be very slow, all characters I introduce I will try my best to flesh out so I won't hit the Majin Buu arc by Chapter 50. There will be R-18 content however it will not be spammed nor any strange fetishes included, very vanilla. Harem? Sort of but not really, read on to find out. Some changes will definitely take place as I'm keeping a checklist of canon events but changing it slightly. Criticism is welcome.

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DiperZ
DiperZLv3

Una mierda, nose quiรฉn mierda es el MC. Parece que es una fanfic de Broly pero por el cao 15 sigue siendo el papรก de Broly y toda esa mierda autor de mierda como tรบ historia de mierda

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AllFiction
AllFictionLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Herohero
HeroheroLv4

interesting story, hope he gets strong enough to take Vados๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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vcut
vcutLv4

very good eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

3yr
zBrOsDivz
zBrOsDivzLv4

Ok you got me sold with that Alpha-Male MC Tag. I'll wait and see how the story unfolds later on if you don't drop it midway like most novels on this site.

3yr
LegendOfTheNorth
LegendOfTheNorthLv4

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IGUR
IGURLv3

Very interesting story!! Hope u don't drop it.

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