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2020-09-29 14:58

The story has good prospects. It’s a quite well written story. An MC on quite the power trip determined to bitch slap anyone and everyone. Everything was going so smoohly till chapter 11 where the hentai fest started. If the story went down a little less *** oriented path, it would be golden.

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