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awesome book untill chapter 11 and onwards as it turns into a **** fest I don't mind the occasional mention or scene of *** but this is just damn it ruined it for me as I had enjoyed your book but all to their own as I know some people will live it but it is not for me

The story is good but I feel that there are too many *** scenes as I came to read to story not about *** stories so I hope that it would be toned down abit soon but overall its quite good

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the story is really good , it has a lot of potential ,but please update the chapaters::::::::::"""""""$$$$$$$$$$$$@/*66'5*:/"/'*""!:"::"(""::(

La historia va muy buena, el MC es inteligente y sacó bastante provecho de todo, me gustaría que se consiguiera a la princesa sirena en los próximos caps

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The story has good prospects. It’s a quite well written story. An MC on quite the power trip determined to bitch slap anyone and everyone. Everything was going so smoohly till chapter 11 where the hentai fest started. If the story went down a little less *** oriented path, it would be golden.

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