Author here! I apologize for doing this, but I joined KDP Select and can only show 10% of book one. Chapters 5-46 are gone. If you want to read them, my book is only $1.99 on Amazon. Chapters 1-4 of book one is here while Chapters 47-? of book two are still here and available. Once again, I am sorry, and please understand why I did this. Thank you for all your support!

Well built world with great character! Nice grammer and vocab and also smooth feeling while reading, so ith has great potential! Keep up the good work!

Well written and quality writing. The story development and character design is good. Having a non-human MC is quite refreshing as well. Everything seems to be creative and the length of the chapters justifies about the information that the author is trying to convey, us the readers! Without much being said, the story is good. I recommend it, maybe in the future I will read more chapters to understand more of this interesting story. Thank you for reading my review! -The TradeMaker

The story is very well written. The character build is excellent. The characters and the story line blends well. I'm eager to read more. Please update soon

I love the premise. A forbidden love's fruit is sent to another world. The writing quality is great, characters are all relatable, especially the children, and the world background is slowly being expanded, but I love that for now Endru is focused on keeping his family safe.

Very interesting concept and it's quite refreshing to read considering that there's only so much info you can cram per chapter. This is a wonderful time to pass the time and it's definitely worth reading.

I was hooked by just the synopsis lol and honestly the way you built the world the story is set is was done really well. I am hoping I can get to that level sometime. Your characters seem really interesting too. Good job all the way!

Good novel man, you're a pro. I get that ur American? or are you not but an English teacher? The grammar is on point and punctuations aren't wrong unlike mine hahaha. It's a good story but I find the world (environment) and characters hard to imagine as I don't know how they look like. But you know, that's just me man, I tend to read books who describe their characters on how/what they look like. KUDOS! will read new updates soon.

The action scenes in this story are intense and gripping, so if that's what floats your boat, I'd definitely recommend this piece. The descriptions of the story's settings and characters are good, but they could be more detailed!! There are other parts of the story that could also use more elaboration, for example where did the MC get all their knowledge from? Besides those minor issues, this story is headed in a positive direction ^u^

The story is very captivating, as well as the world building is immense within the first few chapters. You can really visualize the world the author is trying to make. The writing and story flow is authentic and keeps your on your toes as you read from chapter to chaper. Good work author!