Review Detail of LittolSol in - The Fall -

I could see the work you put into this novel ( he fact that you posted 4 chapters in one day) and I can also see that it also needs improvements. There are visible wrong grammar and punctuations and the character design is a tad bit confusing. Other than that, the story is good, the world and her origins is a mystery that it makes you want to know why she's there in the first place! Keep your stability of updates strong (I promise you, updating every day is really helpful), One last thing. You should fix your chapter titles, it looks really messy.