Hi, author here. I'm shamelessly putting my novel five stars because I actually got aroused writing it lmao. This is a story about a woman who revealed herself to be a Goddess, chose the protagonist to be his king. Giving him the power of the thousands of souls that the Goddess collections. As new couples, they struggle the everyday life of what they should do as the girlfriend has the pride of a Goddess and the boyfriend has the massive wong and the microscopic talent

Thaankyoouu soo muuuchh ^^!!

Thanks for letting me know hahaha

Thank you so much ^^ I'll keep working hard!!

I could see the work you put into this novel ( he fact that you posted 4 chapters in one day) and I can also see that it also needs improvements. There are visible wrong grammar and punctuations and the character design is a tad bit confusing. Other than that, the story is good, the world and her origins is a mystery that it makes you want to know why she's there in the first place! Keep your stability of updates strong (I promise you, updating every day is really helpful), One last thing. You should fix your chapter titles, it looks really messy.

"I could feel my face turn pale and my eyes wide open" is the correct phrase for that.

She sounds really shy and kind here but when she asked where and who the girl was, she sounded really mean. So it's really confusing.

My head snapping is really scary, you should replace it with a "my head turned"

Before she became Lady Elise ^^

I just can't help but notice how great the characters and world development is. Although there were some grammar and punctuation, it can still be understood. Keep up the good work, it's a really promising work and I've added it to my bookmarks! 9.5/10!!!

Thankyou!! I've fixed it now, the spacing doesn't work when it gets published ._.

The way the words are placed is so detailed. Although there is missing and misplaced punctuation, it can be brushed off since you can still understand the story altogether. I can tell that the author has put a lot of effort to put in even the smallest detail. Great job!

But... The marriage? :(

Thank you very much! ^^

Thanks for giving me a heads up!

Thank you so much! I appreciate that a lot! ^_^

Thank you, I will keep that in mind.

I may tweak it more a little, as it isn't the fullest extent of her beauty.

Thanks ahahaha

I imagined that the doctor must've seen someone worst than Alecia's condition until I realized they must've been dead at that point. lol