Started well enough (except for his last wish about karma that didnt make sense). But it has been loosing its magic. The longer chapters are a very nice addition, but there has been less and less interesting interactions with side characters(the meat and potatoes for an op mc novel). Also, the dumbing down of the mc(and others) to cause conflict is rather frustrating to read. Yeah absolute power corrupts absolutely and all that, but it shouldnt make him an idiot(or his supreme intelligence AI). Sometimes he is cold, clever, and secretive. Then he does an 180 and is emotional, foolish, and openly shares his secrets. It would have been better to write more interesting interactions with side characters instead of ‘the adventures of only the MC and his ego issues’. Overall, it started ok but I think the story has taken the wrong direction.
ScottyTheD
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