I state that so far only 10 chapters have been released, so this review is considered "to trust". I read a lot of fan fiction about danmachi, really many and every time there were two options to choose from. The tragic past, or one that is never explained in detail because it matters little to them. There is a third category however. I would call rarities among the rarities, where the past is simple, coincided and really serves to give more depth to the main character. This novel has one of these past. You have surely already been able to read something or if you have not read it, just read the first line. " I am cancer-stricken" essentially what it says. From here the past evolves and explains who are the protagonists that act in his previous life, and we can discover a bit of the personality of the protagonist from the first chapters, avoiding all the information of little account or meaningless.. Certainly little is taken into account about his mother, it was a bit put aside just because it wasn't important in the novel itself and could only serve to enrich the backstory more, but we know that by her character, she has always been close to the protagonist. I think the writing quality is excellent, the descriptions aren't boring and are put in order to stimulate the reader to continue reading, everything proceeds with a moderate speed, the plot is not fast but not slow, it evolves chapter after chapter in a stable way. The world has yet to be explored properly, I mean it’s only 10 chapters but from the expectation I would say that the author will manage without problems. Last but not least, the stability of updates. The author says he has never written before and that this is his first work, yet he manages to write two chapters a day, and they are very long, from the amount of pages no less than 2000 per chapter, someone even over 2500. I don’t know if it’s a natural talent or just that author is a liar, lol. The only thing that should be improved could be the use of even more specific words and more present comparisons to make readers better imagine the scenes that are taking place, but I would say that for a fan fiction on webnovel, the quality is more than good, I’d say it’s of the highest quality. This novel deserves the 2nd place in the ranking.

This story is rather boring and the story development is very slow. The MC is still level 1 at the actual chapter and the prologue alone goes 5 chapters. The skills he gets are not really interesting. The Romance of this fanfiction of a Harem Novel makes no progress cause the MC doesn't get over the gf he had in the prologue which is the only reason why it's so long.

I know, it's too early to judge, but so far it was fantastic, I mean it was just his backstory so far. Anyway, his death nothing too exaggerated, he was simply victim to tumour, had to leave his girlfriend alone the day after he confessed (RAIJU GO DIE!! wait he died.... I literally cursed him to death) Anyways, I never felt that his past was unnecessary, It did not feel dragged out for long, neither was I tired of the same cliche backstory, first life, etc etc. rather it touched me emotionally and made my eyes watery... damn onion ninjas... Got reincarnated to Danmachi, has a 'reincarnation system' that will be used to justify some bullsHit author will write. But I sincerely hope he isn't someone like Vahn Mason, I honestly dislike that selfless idiot breaking down every three chapter even after 1000+ chapters, there was no core development in character, same sissy manwhore collecting girls like pokemon, even Ash Kethum did not catch so many pokemons even though the title said "Gotta catch 'em all"... Look at me grumbling now.... So as I was saying, don't make him too much selfless for his own good. He didn't have time to live to the 'fullest' so, maybe this time? He has a good-natured kind elder brother type character, he has shown so far, loyal to one GF, not a harem king mat. and maybe this fic will have late romance, cuz he had difficulty to move on? IDK, just a guess... This is by no means a proper review, cuz it was not meant to be... well I just wanted to express myself and encourage the author to write some good drugs, cuz it has potential in my opinion. GOod LuCk1,

medium story, weak and crying protagonist, just a cannon fodder, romances in this style are left over in spacebatles, it's not my style. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Since i am a normal person, i give 3!

This is a true gem in 10 chapters it has made me laugh and has made me cry the characters are wonderfully developed and the world is a rich and colourful place you are a fool if you don't read this it made my day

It's fun so far but I think you should put in more interactions since it looks like I'm reading a summary and it's kind of bland. Well that's no more and please let the MC not join the Hestia family, it is tiring to have to read so many fanfictions that are always in that family, as for Asumi, the truth is that I want that drama of the bride to end and to move on, Since the girlfriend is no longer his wife, for sure, he already had children, among many things, it is not realistic that a love continues for a long time, at least from my point of view. Have a good day brother, your Fanfic is good, just don't fall for everyone's game and desperately follow the canon, create your story without worrying about the plot and the protagonists since YOUR MC is the main character now the others are secondary, just my thinking xD

i was on the verge of crying for about an hour reading the prologue. you certainly know how to get people invested in the characters. I commend you on that as much as I hate you for hurting my feelings that much.