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AnthonyCerbic
AnthonyCerbicLv53yrAnthonyCerbic

I know 3.6 I gave the story looks like low score, but its only because of many novels on this site get unrealisticly skewed scores like, all 5 stars on some cheap Chinese cookie-cutter cultivation. Its 3.6 but its on a fair scale of 1-5, not the usual 4.5-5, OK? Anyway, a pretty decent start for the story. A bit weak on the "hook" - like, there's no world to save, there's no imminent peril to deal with - but fairly interesting still, kinda slice-of-life-ish. Writing style is unpolished and lacks flavor, but not horrid and hopefully will improve with time; MC is sympathetic and promising. Basically, I am looking forward for more chapters, so its already better than 95% of the usual crap.

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SirGlue
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Those are definitely issues i have noticed, and I am working on improving my writing with every chapter. I really appreciate you reviewIng my book, and giving your honest thoughts.

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Lancorian
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so true