Review Detail of RenuKakkar in The Treasure King

I found the story interesting. I read about 5 chapters from the 35 chapters that have been published. The synopsis was interesting and I would suggest not to give the story away in it. The world background and the character design are well done. The story is developing well and the stability of updates is well indicated. I liked his discovery of an underground lake and the shinning yellow crystal that enhances his power to see things. There are, however, some grammar issues which do not interfere with the flow of the story. I would suggest using Grammarly or an online grammar checker to run the text through before publishing the chapter. I will do a revisit later to see the progress of the novel and give another review. All the best, Author!