Review Detail of iam_adh in The Treasure King

The story was very interesting in the beginning, but then I started to lose interest once that girl appeared in the MC's life. I'm not a fan of romance in general, so that may not bother other readers. The synopsis was interesting as well, but, you basically just told me the entire story: I almost dropped the story right there. If you change the synopsis just a bit so people would want to know what happens, I think you'll gain more readers. I didn't see much grammatical errors, however, there were some. The MC was interesting at first,but when the girl came, it's like his whole personality flew out the window along with his logic. The character design though is designed well, I can see what people are really like so that's good. The world background was detailed for me to imagine it so that's fine. The story devolpment seems paused, I don't know if you intended to have a filler but it feels that way and I feel like that takes the attention away from the actual story. However, this story had great potential, and I hope to see it grow into a great novel.