Review Detail of DaisukiDayoSenpai in The Shadow I live With

I've read your "They Fall Apart" book before this. Sad to hear that you're stopping it. Still, this book is a cut above it. I could tell because there was a clear distinction between the dialogues and the scenes are well thought out. Slap in more eerie prose in the story and this is good to go. I didn't see any issues grammar wise... or I might've just overlooked them since I was too engrossed in reading ehehe. Keep up the great work! This is added to my library ehehe. This reminds me of the Darkwoods game because of the first scene ^o^