Review Detail of qsdfh in Pokemon: Master of tactics

There are three main elements to write a good story: - Background: This story is a fanfic of pokemon thus it has a solid background to work with. The author has original ideas that are implemented along with the original work. It's pretty good, sadly there are few descriptions of the environment. Plus, the MC hasn't explored much of the world after almost 300 chapters. - Characters: The characters are each have their own personality and it's really good that the author has also provided personalities, habits and quirks to the Pokemon. The author has made some good effort on this and it shows. The only personnal drawback for me is that I don't like the MC personality. - Plot: This is main weakness of the story. For the simple reason that there is none. The MC arrived in the Pokemon world from our modern society but the MC doesn't seem interested in knowing how or why. The MC doesn't seem to have a long term goal, we don't know why he raises pokemon, why he invests 24h of his time catching and training pokemon while risking his life. Conclusion: The story seems more of a slice of life where each chapter is about the daily life of the MC and his pokemon. There are few exciting events happening while most fights are skipped. It has solid characters and background and thus is a pleasant read. However, there are many infodumps that interrupt the pace of the story and destroy the immersion.