Review Detail of Klaymore in Pokemon: Master of tactics

First the best. The world. Author did a good job at turning the pokemon world into a xianxia-like world. Or a litrpg world. You have your levels and then your stages where your pokemons are much more stronger. Then he built a good enough world around it. It's good how the pokemon world was transformed to fit into that xianxia mold. The power progression could be better but at least it feels good enough. It gives you that power up fix constantly. Now, the bad. Author is just writing whatever comes to his mind. He is very creative with the way he transformed the pokemon world but the way he conveys the plot is really bad. He contradicts himself often but that's not the worst part. The telling. He is telling us a story and doesn't let us read it for ourselves. I'm pretty sure that at least half of the contents could be thrown to the trash and story would still be the same. He is constantly making MC ramble about facts (that many times are not logical or contradict another fact he previously went on to ramble about as well). That is the worst part. We get like 1 fifth of plot and progression and the rest is info dump. Some times there are several chapters of info dumps. He also tends to show the characters doing something and then goes on to explain to us what they did. he writes: "I hate you very much." Said Alex. Alex felt a lot of hatred towards that person because the way that person has been acting is really dumb." He writes like this when he has already written about how that person acts. This is obviously an example and not exactly how things are written but you get the idea. I feel that the author would benefit tremendously of watching youtube videos about writing and reading a little about it. The story is pretty good and he has show he is very creative and can make fun and interesting concepts and events but he just regurgitates them as they come and doesn't try to polish what he writes. I get it that he is "writing just for fun" or "doesn't care if you like it or no" or whatever but I feel that if he has put so much effort into this that it would not be a waste of his time if he tried to get a little better. His creativity has progressed a lot since the earlier chapters. There are no longer so many plot holes or stupid character or plot developments but his writing has remained stagnant. he could do better. Author, if you read this, check Brandon Sanderson's lectures on youtube. They are very enlightening and can help you a lot with your telling problem.