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It's Unique and very good. the story tells you that not everything is good like in the anime, but not overwhelms the reader with cruel and disgusting things, also the mc have a decent development and that's rare in fanfics, usually the mc are emos that doesn't give a damn and the authors put the antihero tag as if they are fans of kirito. absolutly recommended

The author wanted some reviews, so here we go: Writing quality: Some errors along the way, but let's be real here: there are more than 200 chapters by now, there will always be some mistakes in such a mass of chapters. All around, the author is constantly getting better at expressing himself, so I'd say 4 Stars here is fair. Stability: We have 200+ chapters, nuff said. (5 Stars) Story Development: The MC is cunning, pretty intelligent. He's fairly cold to outsiders, while being cherishing friends and family. He has a public persona, which means that he is forced to act a certain way in front of others. This is realistic, as everyone has something like this. He is opportunistic, which is good. We see him realistically developing his team, while sometimes facing minor setbacks. He does have some future knowledge, but he is not all knowing and still learns new stuff every now and then. The only thing I'd put as a negative here recently developed positively, so 5 Stars it is! Character Design: I already went into this in the case of the MC. There are supporting characters too, though. And they have a personality! The author mostly succeeds to stay true to the canon characters personalities, but what puts this category into 5-Star territory is the fact, that almost all the OC's actually get a unique personality, this is hard to do and even harder to keep up with. Good Job! World Background: Well, it's a more realistic Pokémon setting, The added parts (Potential system etc) are well implemented and at no point did it feel like we got info dumped on. We got a good package at the start and the rest, we are learning along with the MC. This is a good way of doing things, so once again: Good Job! 5 Stars here too. In conclusion: Whoever finds himself here is most likely a Pokémon Fan. Those who can't stand a bit of blood and gritty reality probably won't like this one. For all those, who can stomach a darker take on this childhood staple: Give it a try! It's a good one! Cheers, fellas, and keep on creating and consuming the written word!

I fell in love with the novel, nothing more to say, but please do not end up as the Chinese author, it is a more readable, interesting version and finally the blessed names of the pokémon are understood. I love Pokémon fics, so I've already read all kinds of fic, from disgusting stuff to readable fics. I wish you health and that you develop well the pokemon universe and the characters. I would give it a 10 out of 10, my ratings are from a raw reader, so my requirements are minimal for a pokemon fic.

Warning!!!!!!!.....This novel has a major flaw. Its so entertaining to read and I finished it in no time. Now I'm frustrated waiting for the next chapter. 😂😂

Mixed feelings. That's how I'd describe reading this fic... The beginning is rough. Poor grammar/dialogue, cringey character development, and overall average story structure. I dropped it several times in the first few chapters. I came back to it later on due to some readers' saying that it got better, which it did (in some ways). At first, the MC is insufferable, well, depending on your taste he remains that way for the entire story. He is a mix between ruthless, pragmatic, greedy, vain, prideful, arrogant, and cruel. He disdains the naive, admires the strong, and is so lost in his own ego that he is a ignorant hypocrite. He has almost no empathy for humans and a limited but higher amount for Pokemon (though he often exploits them knowingly if it'll advantage him). He does not actively enact sadistic behavior patterns for pleasure but is not above hurting or causing the death of others if it will benefit him. This is true even when he does not need to hurt them to achieve his goal but will do so if it makes it easier for him. This never really changes. What does change (slightly) is his ability to form somewhat genuine friendships and emotional bonds with humans. Granted he still sees everyone except for those closest to him as tools to exploit when needed. He is phenomenally privileged (due to his meta-knowledge and cheat-like system) but spends many chapters moralizing/grandstanding other characters or in internal monologues that are meant to display his superior mentality. It is gross and pure delusion. What is enjoyable is the limited character growth and the development of his Pokemon both in their personalities, bonds, and strength. The Rookie Tournament arc is solid and there are plenty of enjoyable moments to be had. Worldbuilding is above average in some ways and below it in others. Overall I'd give it a 2.5 / 5, but for a Pokemon fic on this site a 3/5. There are parts to enjoy but also lots of cringe, hypocrisy, excess violence, cruelty, and gross themes and behaviors that are repulsive and tiresome to read through.

TL;DR - pretty great writing, quality author Story starts off well with a very logical mc. Has a realistic world view and makes decisions that those with actual common sense would in his situation. Has a system but it is not invasive or controlling, he essentially has a non-physical pokedex he can use (no personality of its own, thankfully). I didn't give it full stars because at some point the pokemon stop acting like pokes and start acting like human people for some reason. They act like teenagers following an uncle they don't really like but listen to anyway. Mc is still great, pokes for the most part are still great. It doesn't seem to have any over arching story to it, more slice of life, but fun enough to keep reading. If you read through the chapter comments you will find that the Author really does care for his readers and addresses even my own petty complaints. Quite rare on this site to be sure. Definitely worth the read :)

I'm going to make my review simple. Overall, I like the novel, from the story development, the pokemon battle, and the Pokemon's personality. I especially like the pokemon battle the most. But this novel has one fatal flaw. THE ROMANCE. The romance in this novel is so cringe. I feel like the romance ruins the novel, so I think that the author shouldn't even try to include romance in this novel. But if he insists, at least try to learn from other novels where the romance is their specialty. Honestly, I skipped all the romance scenes in this novel, because they're so cringe. Aside from that flaw, it's a good novel

I really like this story and everythink abaut it the setting is cool not everthink is good anf happy the mc has emotions that are somewhere comprehendtif he is not op without a reason. I saw a lot of peaple saying there is a story exactly like this which is likley the inspiration for this one but nothink more I mean even the first chapter is diffrent even if it s only a little detail ( diffrent Team Rocket Frontspeaker ) but the biggest diffrence is quality of style (the hole eastern writing style is in my opinion pretty taxing to read) and the grammar is made by human instead of maschine so this story will as it contiues only outperform the inspiration