Review Detail of JustLikeWriting777 in Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside

I love how dramatic the prologue is! It makes you shoot questions like 'what's happening? and such. I like it because it's unique and u really did an excellent way to describe, so I totally dig ur writing. The main character really makes me curious about him. I've always liked sci-fi so consider me hooked to this! :D