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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv144yr
2020-12-14 04:05

you copied and character and world then cut all strings from said character and its plot, using almost no elements from the world or characters to enhance the story. all he does is talk to a Digimon and look at his stats.

Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)

ShaggyJoestar69
3.8
79 Chs

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Psy_duck
Psy_duckLv4

good potential novel that I stumble across today the. already love the start of the story.................................... .......... .....

4yr

CarrolStark
CarrolStarkLv14

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4yr
NoHaremSectLeader
NoHaremSectLeaderLv10

no harem? author i dont like that question mark get rid of it

4yr
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

DxD no harem [and Devil Peerage] is like Harry potter with no magic, Star Wars with no Force, X-Men with no mutants, One-piece with no oceans! The author of DxD would spit blood reading some of these portrayals of his art! I wont touch this trash! Oh well I do believe in freedom of speech but man could you do this story in Pokemon instead?

4yr
Harvald
HarvaldLv5

So a DXD story without harem is nice, but this author is strongly opinionated against perverts, harem and lust and is a proponent of the one true love concept and is forcing his opinion down your throat in a story which originally is predominantly about lust. I absolutely hate it when an author tries to force his point of view down my throat. The story is well written and would be fun to read but the author to me seems to try to push his agenda against common fanfic elements he dislikes in your face in a story which orginally is everything that she/he dislikes except for the fantasy elements.

4yr
Iamsunny9
Iamsunny9Lv3

Whyyyyy! Just why why why why why why why why why why why hy why why are you making a high school dxd fanfic without a Harem we are already used to those girls being with Mc and if they are not with MC, it just feel like Ntr. You could even make some original instead of this.

4yr
JustAnApple
JustAnAppleLv3

The author knows how to write, but there is no plot development. Day one: I am an ordinary person, day two: I became stronger than the average devil. Day three: digimon. Day four: a dungeon to rock me. Day five: I'm going to go to another universe ..... Sorry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all? Write a fanfic about Killer Reborn if you want. No, I'm not against traveling to other universes, but is this jammed into the main universe? Even his original world (Earth) was much better developed

4yr
StarWriting
StarWritingLv10

You got stuck in the great trap of gamer fanfics, which is you’ve focused way too much on the gamer system and not enough on the actual story. You don’t need to fill your word count every chapter posting his stats.

4yr
TheDaoOfBullshit
TheDaoOfBullshitLv3

Bullshit story DxD with no Harem whats the point of doing this fanfiction anyway if it has no harem. do this shit on MHA not DxD, this is sickening,blasphemous

3yr
Wataray
WatarayLv1

Author, you didn't one of the review so I'm wondering what happen with his wife ? I don't want to start this story depending on it so could you please clarify ?

4yr
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