From the jump, this was very interesting. I like the way how the author introduced the story. I like the characters, they seem realistic enough. I like the mystery involved in this story, it's very alluring. The only problem I really had was the writing quality. Some sentences were confusing due to the grammar, but in time, that's something that can be fixed. I wish the author good luck for this story is very compelling!
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LIKELOL_LoveOverLord:Can you point out the phrases? Pl. if I see it, I won't make the mistake in the futureš§ Thanks for your sincere review!