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SUPREME VISION SYSTEM

chayasreedeka
4.8
118 Chs

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chayasreedeka
chayasreedekaAuthor

thanks for dropping a review...i know this story needs editing which I will do it once the exams r over..do read further..it may not b the ideal system you read in here..it is different😁take care

3yr
Thedragonben
ThedragonbenLv2

your welcome! and the review wasn't just about the exp! it's a really good novel! keep it up!

chayasreedeka:thanks for dropping a review...i know this story needs editing which I will do it once the exams r over..do read further..it may not b the ideal system you read in here..it is different😁take care
3yr
chayasreedeka
chayasreedekaAuthor

thank you so much...i hope u will enjoy reading the story further 😊 stay safe

Thedragonben:your welcome! and the review wasn't just about the exp! it's a really good novel! keep it up!
3yr
Thedragonben
ThedragonbenLv2

You to!

chayasreedeka:thank you so much...i hope u will enjoy reading the story further 😊 stay safe
3yr
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Despite after replacing all the previous chapters of the novel, the author has succeeded in creating a marvellous and fabulous system novel with a scifi genre. Writing Quality: Really nice. excellent. Story Development: As I mentioned above the author has replaced the chapters because of a certain reason that is why we readers might find the earlier chapters short but believe me you will get immerse in the story to read more. Cole gets a Vision system which opens the door of many mysteries in the story. Not gonna spoil it here. Do check this story and believe me you will gonna enjoy it. Keep up with the good work, dear author.

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