Item: SUPREME VISION SYSTEM
Rating: 5
Author: BlaccLotus

BlaccLotusLv124yr

2020-11-10 02:39

[ E X C E L L E N T ] A very good read, the story is so good and well written. Grammar is beyond decent as I hardly found any errors in the book. What I love most about this book is no dragging plot, the story is realistic so we can relate. Both ML and FL are refreshing and interesting characters. FL is so cool and not a pushover and I really like her character, I just hope both of them can work out on their misunderstanding asap. So far the smut scenes were so hot! But I think you don't need to censor the moaning cursing words on their love making. Oh also, maybe you can try to write the smut scene from Male pov, it would be great for male readers (shameless me 😤) Story : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Male lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Female lead : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Smut : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Overall : 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

SUPREME VISION SYSTEM

chayasreedeka

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chayasreedekaAuthor

I so hoped WN had smut rating😂😂 u just made my day hun...damn could u place d smut rating in the front to grab attention 😂😂😍😍😍btw love u n stay safe...

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