Review Detail of Spelloyal in Mushoku Tensei Arthur

It's a really good fanfic! At first I was skeptical because I always found a fanfic about mushoku tensei redundant, since it is a novel mainly about the development of rudeus and there is no great journey to save the world (at least until the last volume that I readed). To my surprise, the author really managed to write something interesting and pleasant to read, this is certainly a good fanfic. The first chapters have some problems but the fanfic remains interesting and the author improves with time. Despite all this, I can't help mentioning that making an original novel would probably be more advantageous than a mushoku tensei fanfic. Just as I imagined it would be after chapter 1, this fanfic is an almost completely original story, the author is really using the world of mushoku tensei and its characters very well, but the story itself is original. Changing the names of the characters, locations and a few events, this would easily become an original novel. So instead of a mushoku tensei fanfic it is reasonable to say that this is an original novel in the world of mushoku tensei. This fanfic is still incredible, but I can't stop thinking that it can be a waste for the author to write this story as a fanfic instead of an original novel.