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Mortem_Black
Mortem_BlackLv24yr
2020-10-01 01:07

This is honestly the best story I've read on this site and I've spent over 3000 hours here...... So please update, this.....I need this.......

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Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzAuthor

Thank you for the review, I haven't updated because I am in fact stockpiling chapters. I am up to 7 chapters written till now and will be releasing 2-3 chapters a week stabily every week. I should have done it from the start ,but hindsight is 20/20 am I right 😕

Mortem_Black
Mortem_BlackLv2

I completely understand as I am doing the same with the story I am currently writing

Anubis_Creationz:Thank you for the review, I haven't updated because I am in fact stockpiling chapters. I am up to 7 chapters written till now and will be releasing 2-3 chapters a week stabily every week. I should have done it from the start ,but hindsight is 20/20 am I right 😕
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

dude you level 2 how 2k hours? and you only have 26 hours read even if hours read is new its not that new so clearly your not reading frequently on this sight and going to your profile on history shows you have little history on here also again level 2 even if smerf account why only 26 hours if you changed accounts at minimum 3 months ago? I call BS on that 3000 hours

ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

correction 2 month minimum

ThanatosGreekGod:dude you level 2 how 2k hours? and you only have 26 hours read even if hours read is new its not that new so clearly your not reading frequently on this sight and going to your profile on history shows you have little history on here also again level 2 even if smerf account why only 26 hours if you changed accounts at minimum 3 months ago? I call BS on that 3000 hours
Mortem_Black
Mortem_BlackLv2

Oh ive been on here for a long time but ive had multiple accounts. thats why I said that. not to mention my time on other sites.

ThanatosGreekGod:correction 2 month minimum
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