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DaOisT_
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2021-01-29 11:14

Writing Quality - Is excelent for the quality of novels on this site. 5 stars Stability of Updates - Just finished reading it all, through the dates of the chapters there seems to be some kind of "order" but could be better. 4 stars Story Development - So, I will not spoil but the plot is not taking the canon side, and is going in completely other way. Add to the fact a Targaryen OC child and well so far I am satisfied. 5 stars Character Design - Is done wonderfully, MC and the characters around him feel real, especially mc who is an OC but actually feels like part of the world 5 stars World Background - Now as this is a fanfic I will not give the world a 5 star but author does a very good job of making the world feel alive. 4 stars

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sonofgeorge
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read mine. this is good but boring easy op mc but mine won't be he will work hard for the first 100 he will train and then other 200 he will hunt some stuff each chapter 1k words don't worry its gonna be good

SovereignOfHeaven
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Hmm... lol

sonofgeorge:read mine. this is good but boring easy op mc but mine won't be he will work hard for the first 100 he will train and then other 200 he will hunt some stuff each chapter 1k words don't worry its gonna be good
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