Item: The Necromancer King (A Game Of Thrones)
Rating: 2.8
Author: JayFireblood

JayFirebloodLv151yr

2023-03-19 05:31

Written at chapter 120. This story started off great but slowly lost its steam. Once MC achieved his goals of conquering the seven kingdoms, he didn't really do anything. Even though he knew The Others(White Walkers) were coming, he did no training or preparing the kingdom. Knowing they were stronger than him. Most of the magic trails were boring and offered nothing to him, just killing for the sake of killing. I would say only two gave something good for him, let alone test him. The Others' volume was too short and didn't really do anything. No one important died or hurt. Some of the first/important characters we meet get pushed back to the point that they don't really do anything or forgotten. The volume that Ser Jamie died in was fairly disappointing. It didn't really make sense or have a proper build to such major character for MC died in. The whole alternative future god of MC kind of ruined the story, like what was the point of our MC then. Should have done something like MC was reincarnated or something. Over started of great and became dull later on. WQ 4 SD 3 CD 2 US 2 WB 3

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