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Daoist721221
Daoist721221Lv54yr
2020-09-18 23:08

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A man in the midst of mighty beings!

NovelDabest
4.1
30 Chs

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Merlin_Satoru
Merlin_SatoruLv5

The beginning of the story was kind of strange, but the story so far is going well. It has a lot of room to improve. I hope he stays with Rias, since he can put some reins in her. kkkkkk

4yr

ZEUS666
ZEUS666Lv5

Writing Quality it is readable.... 4 stars Updating Stability ............. ........4 stars Story Development... very fast 2 stars Character Design.... It would have been better if you said he is an MC with Ayanokoji's body, because Ayanokoji thinks with his head before everything else. 1 star world background DxD has a vast universe for its development, the author of DxD himself has not known how to take advantage of it. 1 star I honestly liked the premise but the development went wrong, but I still know how difficult it is to write so I just try to give my opinion to help you improve dear author (I am not a native English speaker)

4yr
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

ok how did he get in to the hotel if he didn't have money?? pretty sure you need to pay first before you check in and no sane clerk will agreed to his deal thats just a major BS, also how come he's not notice when he's just sitting there in broad daylight tsk tsk, are you one of those author who tell the mc is smart and a manipulator when in truth you just made everyone else dumb, stupid, idiot no brain npc, p.s your naming sense sucks

4yr
MythicalOtaku
MythicalOtakuLv11

dont know how the story goes but I could never get into this as he is in a peerage and I hate when the mc is under someone's control because that is how every single peerage works

4yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Sigh, I just personally don't like it. There some stupid stuff, non-canon stuff. And it's just feels like the work from fanfiction. net. Semi-serious work, with 100 chapters of retailing original story with little new character development, and harem of 2 or 3....naaah, I'm not desperate enough.

4yr
John_Adam_9096
John_Adam_9096Lv14

This author said he is going to drop this novel so I have to give the worst negative review i can give to fail novels.

4yr
FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

4yr
Vincent_Kun
Vincent_KunLv4

just wanted to know if he will ever be freed from being slave of rias (it's always a slave for me if the mc is in peerage) before reading this one ................................................................

4yr
Pumpkin26
Pumpkin26Lv3

Herem againπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

4yr
I_lat3_y0u
I_lat3_y0uLv3

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrorreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemorormeormrormroemeormoaamosmekrr

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