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ZEUS666
ZEUS666Lv54yr
2020-09-03 09:47

Writing Quality it is readable.... 4 stars Updating Stability ............. ........4 stars Story Development... very fast 2 stars Character Design.... It would have been better if you said he is an MC with Ayanokoji's body, because Ayanokoji thinks with his head before everything else. 1 star world background DxD has a vast universe for its development, the author of DxD himself has not known how to take advantage of it. 1 star I honestly liked the premise but the development went wrong, but I still know how difficult it is to write so I just try to give my opinion to help you improve dear author (I am not a native English speaker)

A man in the midst of mighty beings!

NovelDabest
4.1
30 Chs

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