Very good. It has the potential of becoming a masterpiece. You should change the cover. Just put something like the picture below and warn that it's not yours.

1 star because mannñ .. he has incalculable wealth because of his boons received by an entity. but he is still grinding character in game rather than buy the damn company ,so he can just program his character as he liked. good try bro but only idiot would do this.. but for me ..let's just say waste of time and resources of mc

I have also written an Overlord Fanfic with the same premise as yours. Must be an accident that we have almost the same haha. But yours is quite good to say the least. My Fanfic had a really slow build up, 30 Chapters and I have yet to go to the NW. And I have so many haters hahaha. I might have given the things that they didn't want, so maybe you could give it to them. Anyway, you got your self a good plot here. Good luck to you Little one. I hope it will turn well.

It's oddly bad. The Main character is kind of a retard choosing to grind rather than just you know like Funky pointed out coding himself to be overpowered. The World background whilst the author is attempting to expand on it isn't really doing that great a job, but who knows we're early in . It gets better right? No

Good starting point, but butcher by author limited creativity. For someone that get a boon of unlimited money, u have such a narrow mind of using it. I hope author can read "chaotic good" by mister grin. That is how u capitalise on the boon. u can even do what mister grin can't done, by buying the whole company that make the game. Thus, you can exploit the hell out of it. Lets say, u aee giving the power of mods or admin that come with destructive power. or heck, letting the company tell u where all the world item at. or even better, breaking the lvl100 limit during the last few day. So much possibilities yet author decide to not stray further from the OG story thus leading to boring reading. Why bother reading it when i can read the novel again. Ok, even if you are too lazy to think that you can buy the company, you can also buy the world item from player hand. The game is almost over, surely people will sell it no? You do realise that mc boon will end after he goes to new world then why not capitalize it? If i were you, i will fkin hoard everything like a dragon. In conclusion. Dear author, i hope for your future book to be rethink twice before u write. Just keep the word, "how do i capitalize it" whenever u make mc overpower. No need to limit yourself. As a writer, limiting urself of creativity is a sin.

The series has started off strong and i like that ot is extremely similar to the cannon. However i hope that the author doesnt make the MC someone who wants to get along with humans. The whole idea of overlord was to make him not care at all about humans.

one of best overlord fanfict I have read, Infinitely better than some handsome Author book ............................................please more

it honestly looks incredible. the issue of albedo puta, it was good to take. the shaltea issue was good too. I really enjoyed your writing and development. I can't wait to read more.

I thought that this is another fanfic that I will read to the middle and quit, but how wrong I was, now I want more and more !!!! I need a chapter !!!!!! (sound of a drug addict who hasn't taken drugs for a year)