Review Detail of Dela_Fire in Golden Finger Gacha System
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i rated 2 stars at writing quality since i ccant really understand since theybare first person povs being written inside open and close parenthesis and third person point of view which has this - sign (i don't know its name). And also the comma's, periods, capital letters and exclamation point were not putted at the right place, and that's what makes it difficult for me to read (i have high standard of writing quality but since the story is nice, i'll let it slip.) . But the story is nice alongside with the characters.
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That's kind of funny when you have a review like that, if you can't use good grammar, spelling, and punctuation, what right do you have to criticize someone for the same thing? This is a heavily edited version of your review that conforms to the rules of the english language. "I rated the writing quality 2 stars since I can't really understand since the author has first person pov written inside parenthesis while third person point of view is written inside hyphens. The commas, periods, capital letters and exclamation point were not put in the right place. When all of it's added together...that's what makes it difficult for me to read. (I have high standards for writing quality but since the story is nice, I'll let it slip). But the story is nice alongside the characters."