Been here since chapter 6. Good luck bro.

I love that someone actually made a story on webnovel about MTG, but you must not have played for that long as all of the cards you mentioned were recently printed, and weren't actually competitive. The games and how they played out were realistic and I can relate a lot, but no hardcore magic player tells the opponent ANYTHING about their deck until the end of the round. Even if the kid's have beaten adults, trust me, realistically, they'd be blabbing and making misplays, like putting a card onto the battle field, starting to say they cast it, then putting it back in their hand and saying it was a not spell caused reveal. I do love the book though and I got all of the references.

He just said that even these low level spells can be useful, then flat out says they suck. It's like what teachers do when they say, "There are no stupid questions," but what the really mean is, "There will be no stupid questions asked in my class and if you ask a stupid question i will be more likely to give you a worse grade because you'll have interrupted my class and made me lose all respect for you." I did mean to use a run-on sentence there

did you mean people use both?, or that not a single person uses either

thx

Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves", and, "The people that god spurned".

I like them, they are so cheerfull!

That's kind of funny when you have a review like that, if you can't use good grammar, spelling, and punctuation, what right do you have to criticize someone for the same thing? This is a heavily edited version of your review that conforms to the rules of the english language. "I rated the writing quality 2 stars since I can't really understand since the author has first person pov written inside parenthesis while third person point of view is written inside hyphens. The commas, periods, capital letters and exclamation point were not put in the right place. When all of it's added together...that's what makes it difficult for me to read. (I have high standards for writing quality but since the story is nice, I'll let it slip). But the story is nice alongside the characters."

It's back, and you're an IMPOSTER...!

That's also an option

Author, can you merge some of the skills so that they don't just sit in that notes document that I'm sure you have? Because he has way to many skills and it's kinda bugging me that he doesn't use most of his skills after he gets them.

Please tell me what you think of it so far. I think it's not terrible but I am the writer so...

This is my first story but I've been reading books and novels from when I was 6 so I sincerely hope that I have enough experience to know what a not terrible novel is. If there are grammar or spelling mistakes fell free to point them out and I will fix them; also if there are plot holes I will revise a couple chapters to make it fit, and if it's major I will rewrite that part entirely. Thank you and please be respectful.

A ton is 2000 pounds, so .65 tons is actually 1300 pounds of force, I'm not sure if this novel uses metric units but if it doesn't it's 1300.

Lol, no hygiene for you!

Picked for what?

Probably before it was being rewritten.

I keep seeing the gif of the guy sticking his tongue out above your comment and it goes perfectly, even though you commented on something else.

what is it from?