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2020-12-09 04:51

Although I had a feeling this was going to happen, it’s upsetting to see the big discontinued sign. This book had a lot of potential, already loving the characters, the plot and world background even though the story just began. I just want to say writer if you ever see this, you can stop writing the book, sure, but don’t give up on writing. The way you wrote was just so good? Idk how to describe it. What I’m saying is you have a lot of potential and tho I’m sad to see this story go, it’ll be too cruel for the author to continue write a book they no longer have any passion/ care? for. (I really loved the main character)

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Thank you for your kind words. Hopefully Somewhere down the line when i revist this story in a few months, I will pick up where I left off. Thank you for all your support and I’m sorry for disappointing

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